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Hello Jason,
- First of all, nice picture
- I am not sure if this is necessary, but in the first paragraph, you said "El hombre es persona típica." I think you might want to add "una" before the persona.
- overall, really nice sentence structure
Hi Jason.
You wrote “Otros problemas de esta época incluyeron las problemas economicos del todo el mundo después de la Guerra.” It should be "las problemas económicas" with –as and an accent over the second ‘o’
You also wrote “Quiroga escojó palabras para hacer descripciones que podía expresar el secenario exactamente” I am not sure about “escojó” Your trying to say “he choose”(past) or “he choses”(present). I’m not sure the correct conjugation, but maybe try “escogió” Also I can’t find "secenario" in the dictionary. If your trying to say scenario, use “el guión”
The last thing I found was in “En el fondo de todos, probablamente hay una revelación importante de Quiroga” — It is spelled “probablemente” with an “e” Watch out for spelling mistakes
Later–
Evan
